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Some random thoughts

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Tinker

3 haiku, kid parole - hummingbird - poet to reader

sun drenched days of June
perennial kid parole
the child in me smiles
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small bird sips nectar
floats on invisible wings
nature's hovercraft
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tiny bird hovers
on invisible wings
sweet morning glory

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words placed on page pass
to the soul through eyes and ears
poet to reader

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dr_con

Nice Tinker! Clean and profound reflections, enjoyed them all!

 

DC

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tonyv

The tranquility in these haiku delights, Tinker. When all three are taken together (the way you have shared them here), the result is a macrocosm: the three poems represent lines of a haiku with the last one serving as that "a-ha" moment. icon_smile.gif

 

I like how you adhere to the syllable count. In this case, I think doing so helps reinforce the idea of that "coherent whole" which I mentioned above. Perhaps the thoughts aren't so random?

 

Tony

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Aleksandra

words placed on page pass

 

I loved the third poem Tink.

 

I enjoyed all three poems.

 

Thank you.

 

Alek

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