Aleksandra Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 The night tonight is bright with the full moon hanging low showing the face of the partially naked ... earth to the skinless universe. by Mister Poet Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 10, 2009 Author Share Posted May 10, 2009 Today I got letter from our friend John. He greets you again all of you. And he says that he miss us a lot. I am sharing with you his poetry, he wants to share it. From the poems what I got, I can see his changed style of writing. And I love it. And I am so glad and happy, that John, my friend you are keeping writing and you keep your poetical spirit and energy. Prayers for him. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 yes aleksandra this is nicely done i agree with you. i miss are dear freind also. i like the touches about the earth being a live being because that is what i believe and she is called gaia. larsen aka victor btw miss talking to ya aleks where are you? Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 10, 2009 Author Share Posted May 10, 2009 Hey Vic. how are you. I am writing to you on msn but you seems sleeping then . And also some problems around and connection too. So tell me when you are there. Is your com good now? And yes I miss our John too. ok Victor see ya Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 Hi Mister Poet, Long time no see or hear! This poem is quite sparse compared to some of the prose pome like works you''ve posted before; but it's still packed with great images and that wonderful eye for detail that you have, still works well here. Love the "skinless universe" - raw, arresting and inspired! goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spauldhr Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 It's so visceral. Beautifully done. I am glad you are posting his stuff, he was always a good read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 10, 2009 Author Share Posted May 10, 2009 Thanks for commenting my friends on John's work. He would be glad to read our comments, so after some time I am gonna send to him. Thank you from his name Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 I agree. This is a good write. Must be reading Williams. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pawn shop Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 Excellant ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 So much talent mp! badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 Hey Mr. P! aleksandra wrote: The night tonight is bright with the full moon hanging low showing the face of the partially naked ... earth to the skinless universe. Moon, face, partially naked, hanging low, skinless ... all highly sensual and thought-provoking. I like how you captured the moment. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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