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...amazed by the pink blossom

of our curtains, head butts the glass.

I empty the dregs of last night's

burgundy red, swallowing

the buzz.

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dcmarti1

I hear Ezra Pound in here. Bee, blossom, buzz, butts, burgundy. Tight, concise, AND funny. Nice job.

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badger11

Cheers. Always a pay-off to bring a smile into the world.

 

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Tinker

Hi Badge, Love this little bite of life. I too read it with a smile but was more impressed with its efficiency. Nice writing.

 

~~Tink


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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badger11

I've never had anything referred to as efficient before :0)

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