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Through the Mist

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Through the Mist

The gray dawn yawns
without the sun in sight
and the autumn sky shifts
with a misty cobweb of fog,

Through the wet film
the tree’s green takes on a dusty shade
without reflection,
just a tinge
of its former self dares intrude.

A clammy chill lies on my skin
spreading cold up
to the base of my neck
like a screech too shrill.

Mornings like these I want to crawl
back to my cocoon,
that warm spot
buried deep beneath our downy quilt
and dream of you beside me
on a summer afternoon.
                   --- Judi Van Gorder


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very nice tink, the image of the moment was presented vividly and clear.

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It's true...no matter how demanding your daily schedule may be, the onset of such weather will make one feel quite uncomfortable. The cocoon you just left, will look even more inviting.



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Thanks for reading and commenting.


Badge, Yes these are chiilly days and I'm glad that came through in the poem.


Barry, Thank you for the nice words.


Yarnspinner, Nice to see you commenting on the forum. Yes that cocoon sounds good right now.



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