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fdelano

I tried to keep light

 

in a bottle, but beauty

 

up and died on me.

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Tinker

Hi Frank, For so few words, this little poem triggers several images and questions. I like it.

 

 

~~Tink


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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moonqueen

Brings to my memory's front, catching lightening bugs, putting them into jars with holes punched in the lid and some fresh-pulled grass (as 'food', of course). We'd fall asleep, watching the jar light up. And yes, morning brought death, as well.

 

Lovely little piece.

 

t

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dcmarti1

Graceful.

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fdelano

Thanks to all who revived this little bit of light.

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Terry L shuff

Describes many situations,  it will come to mind for me , often

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Dee2

As others have suggested, this can have many interpretations, but it also stands on its own very well.

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