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Work Week #20 Poem a Day

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Work Week

Blast in a crowd leaves
destruction meant to last.
City brought to halt
for manhunt without pity
Taut work week ends with one
suspect dead, one caught.
Two lives can never
pay back what is due.
Tears of fear end
in grateful cheers.
Why? is the lonely cry.
-------- --Judi Van Gorder

Playing with head and tail rhyme.


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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dcmarti1

Did not even catch the "head and tail". In fact, never even heard of it. Very creative. I think it is emotional because the pace is so fast throughout the poem.

 

But I think I'd a comma. :)

 

suspect dead, one caught.

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