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zigzag of zebra
crossing slow summer unzips
those crocodile smiles

2

winter winds shatter
glass and unpins butterflies
births an early spring

3

quick, quickly, quicker
that dashing crowd of crisp leaf
the bus stop empty

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dcmarti1

Oh, that third image is so vivid! Hits home from my many mornings waiting at the bus stop, OR for the subway to open.

 

That second image was sneaky: I thought it was UNSPINS until I read it again: UNPINS. So the butterflies were on display?

 

You lost me on the first one. :)

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badger11

Thanks marti. Unspins might be an interesting variation.

 

all the best

 

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