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Crazy bird
chuckling on that buff brick wall,
feathers a jungle
of blues and greens. I want
to caw to you.

 

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That crazy bird
chuckling on this crumbling brick wall,
feathers a jungle
of blues and greens. I want
to caw to you.

 

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That crazy bird
chuckling on the red brick wall,
feathers a jungle
of blues and greens. I want
to caw to you.

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