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      Blogs   05/01/2017

      Blogs are now accessible to Guests. Guests may read and reply to blog entries. We'll see how this works out. If Guest participation becomes troublesome, I'll disable Guest access. Members are encouraged to make use of the PMO Members' Promotional Blog to promote their published works. Simply add your latest entry to the blog. Include relevant information (your name or screen name, poem title, periodical name, hyperlink to the site where published, etc). If you have a lot of them and feel you need your own blog, let me know, and I will try to accommodate you. Members are encouraged to continue also posting their promotional topics in the Promotions forum on the board itself which is better suited for archiving promotions.

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badger11   

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Ambushed by this sky.
A watercolour brush
Deft with pink promises.
Last night's thunder
Bothered no one.
Leaf graffiti on graves.
The houses buttoned
Until summer guests.

I linger on a border
Where waves fret.
Memories eye defences.
My labrador tugs
A chain of loneliness.
The pull to hours
Of strolls with you.
We ghost along a wall.

 

 

 

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Ambushed by this sky.
A watercolour brush
Deft with pink promises.
The graveyard sleeps.
Night's sea symphony
Bothered no one.
The houses buttoned
Until summer guests.

I linger on a border
Where waves fret.
Things eye defences.
My labrador tugs
A chain of loneliness.
The pull to hours
Of strolls with you.
We ghost along a wall.

 

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Across this sky
A watercolour brush
Deft with pink promises.
The graveyard sleeps.
Night's sea symphony
Bothered no one.
The houses buttoned
Until summer guests.

I linger on a border
Where waves fret
Eyeing sea defences.
My labrador tugs
A chain of loneliness
Back to hours
Of strolls with you.
We ghost along a wall.

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tonyv   

I think I'm aware of the inspiring prompt, and I like where you've taken this. I like it all, but especially "summer guests" and the mention of "border," how it comes full circle to the title which, by the way, is perfect.

Tony

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badger11   

Thanks Tony. I believe there is a conversation of poems and I find pleasure in hearing that. Thanks you for starting this conversation!

all the best

Phil

 

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Tinker   

Hi Badge,  I wonder if you could keep

"Last night's thunder
Bothered no one"

And also Keep

"The graveyard sleeps."

To me they are very different images and although I felt a connection to "last night's thunder"   I really like the graveyard sleeping image.

Oh and I love the Lab, this was I felt very comfortable in. Despite the graveyard.

~~Tink

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