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Tinker

"If a tree falls in the forest and no one is there. . . ."

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Tinker

"If a tree falls in the forest and no one is there. . ."

A g-r-o-a-n and a c-r-a-c-k
shatter the sapient silence.
A widow maker
crashes to the forest floor.
In its wake, a hush hovers.
                  ~~Judi Van Gorder

A "sonic" Tanka    Playing with sound, in particular onomatopoeia.

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tonyv

This is very nicely done from content to form. I like the layout, the special typography in L1, and the onomatopoeia. Nothing is overdone; it's just right. Even the title is perfect.

Tony

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Tinker

Thanks Tony, I appreciate your attention to the details.  It is encouraging.

~~Tink

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