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badger11

Her leg
stretches above
the foam, slowly turning
the hot water tap off with her toes.
It is performance.
A ballet in mirrors, a moist
solitude.
She opens her book and reads.

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tonyv

Steamy (literally and figuratively) :excl:

Tony :biggrin:

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badger11

Thanks Tony. A very slight poem and one where I found most interest in counting syllables.

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Tinker

Badge, This isn't a slight poem.   I read it and thought , Ahhh    Tony said it all..

~~Tink

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badger11

Thanks Tink. Slight in the sense of the 2/4/6/9/5/8/3/7 I was hanging the words on:rolleyes:

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