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dr_con

 

Sanctuary

 

Sanctuary is

Home without address

Longitude and Latitude

It spirals with you

Through the ever

Yes ever moving

remembrance this

this is where You

Belong this this

Everchanging

is always always

Your Home.


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Tinker

Hi DC,  Interesting use of repetition.  I have to admit I wanted to see where this was going. I needed more.

~~Tink


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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tonyv

A lovely exaltation of ephemerality. While @Tinker's point is well taken -- the same can be and has been said about plenty of my works :tongue: -- for me it's most often about the mood. And what can capture the intangible sense of the transitory better than poetry or perhaps music? Thank you for taking me there.

Tony


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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JoelJosol

The use of enjambment has worked effectively for me with the theme of "everchanging" present, dr_con.


"Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach

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