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Sanctuary

 

Sanctuary is

Home without address

Longitude and Latitude

It spirals with you

Through the ever

Yes ever moving

remembrance this

this is where You

Belong this this

Everchanging

is always always

Your Home.

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Hi DC,  Interesting use of repetition.  I have to admit I wanted to see where this was going. I needed more.

~~Tink

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A lovely exaltation of ephemerality. While @Tinker's point is well taken -- the same can be and has been said about plenty of my works :tongue: -- for me it's most often about the mood. And what can capture the intangible sense of the transitory better than poetry or perhaps music? Thank you for taking me there.

Tony

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