FrasMac Posted October 25, 2018 Share Posted October 25, 2018 Hi, my first post on this site. I hope you like. Please forgive me my slow start, I will get around to posting comments on others, probably after this busy week is over! Wine on a Weeknight The garden’s looking good, the flower beds Are flourishing intensely in the sun, These fruit trees with their blossoms budding red Will share their love for free with anyone Whose patience and close care will help them grow, Who’ll share his thoughts, his heart and soul in turn. Just sitting here alone you seem to know It’s time my inward searching was adjourned. The setting sun, still golden through your hair, Enough to draw my eyes up from the lawn, Your face, a sun of love that shows you care Reveals the heart where constantly I’m drawn. Two glasses in your hand, old wine to share, An ageless gift yet grows, still holds us there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted October 25, 2018 Share Posted October 25, 2018 Welcome FrasMac. I'm excited that you've joined. There's no pressure here; members participate as much as they can/desire. Your title caught me off guard. I thought the topic notification email was a newsletter from one of the sites to which I subscribe! When I opened it I was pleasantly surprised to see it was from PMO: a poem. I enjoyed this well crafted sonnet, the garden/vineyard setting, how you introduced the human element, the impeccable meter. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted October 26, 2018 Share Posted October 26, 2018 So glad you are here Mac. Nice introduction. Shakespearean Sonnet in wine country. I particularly liked: 3 hours ago, FrasMac said: Two glasses in your hand, old wine to share, great line, I could see it. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrasMac Posted October 26, 2018 Author Share Posted October 26, 2018 Thank you both very much for your encouragement! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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