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Crazies

Lunatics
target right
target left
black or white

one sends bombs
one powder
makes no sense
scream louder

crazy talk
stay aware
odd actions
best you share

live your life
it's a must
unafraid
we will trust.

ev'rything
can't be fixed
don't incite
lunatics
    ~~Judi Van Gorder
 

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~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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tonyv

Nice work, Judi. One small suggestion -- I would eliminate the period at the end of S4.

The title definitely caught my attention. If you're into zombies, the infected, whatever they may turn out to be in the "apocalypse," I recommend the movie The Crazies (2010 film)

Tony


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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