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Tinker

Solstice Rhapsody

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Tinker

IMG_0031(1).JPGSolstice Rhapsody

The full cold moon is shining bright
on this winter solstice Saturday night
I wake with the rhythm leading me,
the words in my head in harmony
with silence all around.

New thoughts arriving with the dawn,
ideas with which to build upon
ebbing on the edge of dreams
sparks that come and go, it seems
illusive rhapsody.
                   ~~Judi Van Gorder

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eclipse

Lovely seasonal work..merry Christmas....

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Tinker

Thank you Barry, Merry Christmas. ~~Tink

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tonyv

Nice composition and presentation together with the picture. Fitting for the season.

Tony 

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Tinker

Thanks Tony, This is a poem I woke up with in my head, well the first 2 lines.  The rest of the sleep poem receded back into my dream and I couldn't grasp it.  So I had to wing it from there.  I thought the original brilliant when I woke with it.  But it had a definite rhythm which I did try to capture sans the forgotten words.

~~Judi

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