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Who was on the other side of Heaven's

door as I had a tug of war with an umbilical
cord through the letter box inside the mirror
the earth crashed into inside the angel's widening 
eye. Being connected has created a disconnection,
why don't the natives hear the river Humber talking to
itself?-the bridge is like a telephone handset that has
been left on a table.

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tonyv

Barry, as is often the case, I enjoy when you incorporate local references. I'm always prompted to do some research. In this case, I read up on Humber

On 1/23/2019 at 6:02 AM, eclipse said:

… Being connected has created a disconnection ...

Yes, this does seem to often be the case. 😐 And you follow it up neatly with a simile to help me feel the disconnect:

On 1/23/2019 at 6:02 AM, eclipse said:
… the bridge is like a telephone handset that has
been left on a table

Nice!

Tony

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eclipse

Thanks tony....

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badger11

Marvellously imaginative as always. I don't think you need inside in L3.

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