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                                          Come Sail With Me                                         
                                          
                                          The flame ignited,                                hot-air-balloon.jpg
                                           hot breath
                                           heats her at her core
                                           causing a warm blush
                                           to bloom from inside
                                           and rise, expanding,
                                           pregnant with anticipation.

                                           She smooths
                                           her kaleidoscopic,
                                           upside down-teardrop gown
                                           and ascends higher
                                           and higher into the blue,
                                           dragging her painted
                                                                                                                                                                      gondola behind.
                                                                                                                                                                      An invitation
                                                                                                                                                                      to sail with the clouds.
                                                                                                                                                                                       ~~Judi Van Gorder

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~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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tonyv

Yes, I think I'll come along for the ride. "Pregnant with anticipation" works well. I wonder if "dragging her painted / caboose behind" would be too much of a stretch.

Tony  🎈🌤️


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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