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Gulf Coast Saturday Morning

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Tropical Storm Barry.jpgGulf Coast Saturday Morning

Hurricane Barry
ferries destruction.
Disruption of life,
rife with wind and rain.
Strain on Saturday,
stay or flee the storm.
Warm, muggy zephyr,
suffers light damage.
Images of flood,
mud and mess hits news.
             ~~Judi Van Gorder

Verse Form:
Raay


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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badger11
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mud and mess hits news.

So often the case with news items, perhaps another reason for an 'uplifting' royal kiss 😀

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dcmarti1

Having lived through Ike and Harvey, the photos and the form help to crystallize the poem, if I am using that in the proper sense. A tension is added (heightened?) that I think might NOT be there except for the strictness.

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Tinker

Thanks Marti, The limited syllable count per line was a challenge. 

~~Tink

Invitation

Give this form a try,
Thai verse in July.
Why not join the quest,
test your writing skill?
Will you meet with me,
be brave, write a Raay.
       ~~ Judi Van Gorder


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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