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For My Granddaughter, Trinity

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For Trinity

Fresh gusts of scented air traverse
the satin curve of sun-blushed cheeks.
A love caress in nature’s verse,
a silent, timeless vow it speaks.
Your beauty blossoms from within.
Unselfish acts are sure to win
esteem from those who watch from afar
your trek to catch the promised star.
                               ~~Judi Van Gorder

Verse Form:  Rispetto


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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tonyv

I love dedicated works, Judi. This is a lovely one with impeccable meter. I would change one small thing; I would use a semicolon or a full stop at the end of L5 after "within."

Tony


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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