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Love letters

I am writing to you,

with the colorless pen

 

with the colorless pen

I write of light and shadows

in the valley

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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In the valley

the bones rots,

under the down.

 

under the down

there is warmth

beyond the sun

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Lake
under the down

there is warmth

beyond the sun

 

 

goldenlangur

 

beyond the sun

is an unknown world

to be explored

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beyond the sun

is an unknown world

to be explored

 

 

to be explored -

how does it feel

not to be afraid

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
Not to be afraid

from the destiny hand

the wheel rotates.

 

the wheel rotates

in rain and sun

another rhythm

 

goldenlangur


goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Lake
the wheel rotates

in rain and sun

another rhythm

 

goldenlangur

 

another rhythm

birds sing to flowers again

another spring

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goldenlangur
another spring

another life flows

in her crystal eyes.

 

in her crystal eyes

the first crescent

through clouds

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur
through clouds

vanished sun

cries for light.

 

What anguish Aleksandra!

 

 

cries for light

borne by the wind

and withered leaves

 

 

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goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Aleksandra
through clouds

vanished sun

cries for light.

 

What anguish Aleksandra!

 

 

cries for light

borne by the wind

and withered leaves

 

 

goldenlangur

 

Thank you goldenlangur icon_smile.gif

 

and withered leaves

and barren trees

...and poor child - alone.


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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goldenlangur
and withered leaves

and barren trees

...and poor child - alone.

 

and poor child - alone

on the marble steps

of the church

 

 

goldenlangur


goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur

Thank you Aleksandra.

 

A "poor child - alone" - brought to mind associations with Christ and abandoned children.

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Tinker
goldenlangur said:
Aleksandra said:
and withered leaves
and barren trees
...and poor child - alone.

and poor child - alone
on the marble steps
of the church
                 goldenlangur

of the church
with its high arched doors open
respite for His flock

 

~~tink


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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goldenlangur
of the church

with its high arched doors open

respite for His flock

 

~~tink

 

respite for his flock

in the spring sun -

a sting in its tail

 

 

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goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur said:
Tinker said:
of the church
with its high arched doors open
respite for His flock
                        ~~jvg

respite for his flock
in the spring sun -
a sting in its tail

                 goldenlangur

I love it, I was wondering how someone was going to handle that last line of mine. You did it perfectly gl.

a sting in its tail
the caped manta owns the sea
deadly grace


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com

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goldenlangur
a sting in its tail

the caped manta owns the sea

deadly grace

 

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deadly grace

its wings blot out the sun

a dark sea bed

 

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Lake
deadly grace

its wings blot out the sun

a dark sea bed

 

 

 

goldenlangur

 

a dark sea bed

alighted by glowing fish

little mermaid sings

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a dark sea bed

alighted by glowing fish

little mermaid sings

 

little mermaid sings

from her seaweed throne

under the Great Bear

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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