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Jalfrezi

They are never my own.

But as a once dear friend said, they never were.

Eitherway, for me, never a possesion or even more than a fleeting friendly vibration.

It seems as if so many now have slipped through my fingers even as I grab for them.

My memory does its best to grasp who they were and how they made me feel.

It was always good.

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pawn shop

Again,

I feel you need to arrange your words better....sorry....

just my humble oppinion

 

Jalfrezi wrote:

 

They are never my own.

But as a once dear friend said,

"they never were"

Eitherway, for me,

never a possesion

or even more than a fleeting friendly vibration.

It seems as if

so many now

have slipped through my fingers

even as I grab for them.

My memory does its best

to grasp who they were

and how they made me feel.

It was always good.

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Aleksandra

Hello Jalfrezi. I think Jonathan have right on this. That form what he suggest I think it is better.

 

Otherwise I like it the poem, and the point inside.

 

And I am thinking why you don't share in the other forum Poetry by Member Poets. It would be more read. This one uses for unlimited poems, if you have more poems to post at same time. It is not wrong here too, but just idea

 

Thank you for sharing

 

Aleksandra


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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