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Wistful Poet

Just once

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Wistful Poet

Just once,

I want to see you suffer,

to feel the same pain that I felt

when you took my best firend away.

 

I want to see the same overwhelming look in your eyes,

I want to tell you the truth,

that not everyone likes you,

and that I'm one of them.

Just once,

I want to hear you say,

to see you expirence,

what its like to lose someone so fast.

Just once,

I want you to go through the hell you put me through.

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pawn shop

Very powerful !!

Your writing has been picking up speed and tempo !

I love it icon_pirat.png

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Aleksandra

Wistful - interesting. It is a good lesson if someone who do bad to feel on his / her skin the same pain. Then it would be much more different...

 

Well expressed

 

Aleksandra

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Wistful Poet

Thanks you guys!

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Terry L shuff

Confucius said;  Before you begin a journey of revenge, dig two graves.

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Dee2

I like that this poem doesn't elaborate on why or how the best friend was taken away. It could be a car accident, a stolen love interest, or whatever the reader wants to imagine.

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