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Pops, pings -- the rails flex in the sun.
The train arrives, when light is gone.


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Aleksandra
Pops, pings -- the rails flex in the sun.

The train arrives, when light is gone.

 

Wow Pops, pings :D . I like it Tony. Very nice expression with rails flex in the sun

I loved this couplet. And I am sure you love this one too, because the trains are your passion icon_razz.gif

 

Well done icon_smile.gif

 

Aleksandra


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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goldenlangur

Hi Tony,

 

Aleksandra is right - wonderful sounds and vivid images make this a great read. I love the haiku like quality of your poem.

 

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tonyv
Pops, pings -- the rails flex in the sun.

The train arrives, when light is gone.

 

Wow Pops, pings :D . I like it Tony. Very nice expression with rails flex in the sun

I loved this couplet. And I am sure you love this one too, because the trains are your passion icon_razz.gif

 

Well done icon_smile.gif

 

Aleksandra

 

I'm glad, Alek, that you enjoyed this couplet. Your replies always make me icon_smile.gif .

 

Tony


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tonyv
Hi Tony,

 

Aleksandra is right - wonderful sounds and vivid images make this a great read. I love the haiku like quality of your poem.

 

goldenlangur

 

Thank you, GL! I was worried that the poem was too short. Your likening it to a haiku makes me feel better about the length aspect of it.

 

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summayya
Pops, pings -- the rails flex in the sun.

The train arrives, when light is gone.

 

Wow! How did I miss this one? This was a pleasant surprise icon_biggrin.png

 

This is a wonderful poem with nice sounds and clear images.

 

Many thanks for sharing!

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