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1) searching for you

2) had to find you

 

Those were the 2 e-mails

sent to me in the last 3 days

by AMBER !!

from out of nowhere.....AMBER !!

she's suddenly appeared in my life again

showing up on this computer screen

here at work

 

Has it only been 5 years..,?

I wonder how she has aged....

no doubt....she must look stunning....

I've only had one photo of her

tucked away

to occasionally look at

during the last 5 years

mainly on her birthday in December

 

Amber, 5 months ago,

ended a 5 year relationship

with some guy named Max

she tried to make it work.......

 

Wow,

it will be so strange and quite wonderful

to see her again in person

her smile, her ways,

her graceful walk

and that's what cutting each other's

pinky fingers

and then intermingling the blood

together

by candle-light can do....

it's a secret bond that holds true....

here's to my blood-sister

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

loved it, you certainly have surprises in your life. oncea female leaves my life she usually hates me. well i have done some stupid stuff and been in shitty relationships lol.

 

i wish u could have a female in my life like that. i have been told by angels in visits while waking up from dreamstate that a female named elizabeth will love me in the future with bown hair and green eyes, that is when christ retirns though.

 

larsen

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Aleksandra

Jonathan, what a lovely poem. It gives some calm and peace. It's enjoyable to read this poem. I loved this one. Very good happening and so exciting. I love the end. And I think that I have heard by you this name, maybe I am wrong.

Ok anyway, I love this poem and it feels so good to read some poem like this one.

 

Thanks for sharing my friend.

 

Aleksandra


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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tonyv

Sweet story, Jonathan. The numbered lines in the beginning immediately caught my attention. I like the excitement and enthusiasm you show here:

Those were the 2 e-mails

sent to me in the last 3 days

by AMBER !!

from out of nowhere.....AMBER !!

she's suddenly appeared in my life again

showing up on this computer screen

here at work

Of course, these are questions that would be on my mind also --

Has it only been 5 years..,?

I wonder how she has aged....

no doubt....she must look stunning....

... and these parts show your overall fondness for her:

I've only had one photo of her

tucked away

to occasionally look at

during the last 5 years

mainly on her birthday in December ...

 

Wow,

it will be so strange and quite wonderful

to see her again in person

her smile, her ways,

her graceful walk.

Quite lovely!

 

Tony


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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