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Lake

Dumbfounded

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Dumbfounded

-- 5.12 Earthquake in Sichuan

 

Despairing cries float

in the dusty air, piercing my ears –

a cruel replay of a thirty-two year old

nightmare.

 

Out of concrete debris

a blood-stained arm reaches,

a hand is held tight

by a hand outside.

 

On the rubble, backpacks

queued up, waiting silently

for the bell ring, for the

class to start.

 

Tucked in the swaddle,

a text message vibrates -

baby, if you can be alive, remember

mom love you!

 

Like an eagle, he spreads his body

over four students, they are survived.

From the far sky, a humming voice lingers:

taking my wings, off you fly.

 

The TV is turned off, I see myself

on the screen with a blank stare.

My words are no words,

tears no tears.

 

 

( A year after the China Earthquake, I dug this poem up, revised it, but it is still not to my satisfaction. I'm stuck. Need desperate help. Thanks in advance.)

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badger,

 

What a pleasant surprise! Especially, when it is not expected. A treasure to keep. Yes, it helps me to understand my own poem through your reading.

 

A million thanks.

 

Lake

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