• Announcements

    • tonyv

      Registration -- to join PMO ***UPDATED INSTRUCTIONS***   03/14/2017

      Automatic registration has been disabled. If you would like to join the Poetry Magnum Opus online community, use the "Contact Us" link at the bottom of this page and follow these instructions: 1. Check your email (including your spam folder) in a timely fashion for a reply. 2. After you receive a reply, use the "Sign Up" link at the top right corner of the page to create your account. Do this fast. I've lost my patience with people who use the "Contact Us" link to express interest in joining and then don't bother to check their email for a reply and don't bother to join after registration has been enabled. The queue fills up fast with spammers, and I have to spend my time sifting through the rubbish to delete them. The window of opportunity for joining will be short. I will not have my time wasted. If you don't check your email and you don't bother registering promptly, you will find that registration has been disabled and your future requests to join may go ignored. /s/ Tony ___________________ [Registration will only be enabled for a short while from the time your message is received, so please check your email for a reply and register within 12 hours of using the "Contact Us" link. (Be sure to check your spam folder if you don't see a reply to your message.)]
    • tonyv

      IMPORTANT: re Logging In to PMO ***Attention Members***   03/15/2017

      For security purposes, please use your email address when logging in to the site. This will prevent your account from being locked when malicious users try to log in to your account using your publicly visible display name. If you are unable to log in, use the "Contact Us" link at the bottom of the page.
    • tonyv

      Blogs   05/01/2017

      Blogs are now accessible to Guests. Guests may read and reply to blog entries. We'll see how this works out. If Guest participation becomes troublesome, I'll disable Guest access. Members are encouraged to make use of the PMO Members' Promotional Blog to promote their published works. Simply add your latest entry to the blog. Include relevant information (your name or screen name, poem title, periodical name, hyperlink to the site where published, etc). If you have a lot of them and feel you need your own blog, let me know, and I will try to accommodate you. Members are encouraged to continue also posting their promotional topics in the Promotions forum on the board itself which is better suited for archiving promotions.
Sign in to follow this  
Followers 0
Tinker

#22 Hir a thoddaid

1 post in this topic

Explore the Craft of Writing Poetry
Welsh Verse
Features of the Welsh Meters
Welsh Codified Divisions

Hir a thoddaid, heer-ah-thódd-eyed (long stanza with toddaid), the 22nd codified Official Welsh Meter is the most commonly written awdl meter of modern time. The National Eisteddfod, as of only a few years ago, offered an annual prize for the poem written in this meter. (It also must be in written in Welsh.) The theme is usually a memorial, a eulogy.

The elements of the Hir a thoddaid are:

  1. stanzaic, written in any number of sixains made up of a mono-rhymed quatrain followed by a Toddaid couplet.
  2. syllabic, lines 1-5 are written as 10 syllable lines and L6 is a 9 syllable line.
  3. mono-rhymed,
  4. composed with an addendum, a gair cyrch following the main rhyme and caesura of L5. The gair cyrch end rhyme is echoed in the first half of L6 in secondary rhyme, assonance or consonance.x x x x x x x x x A

    x x x x x x x x x A
    x x x x x x x x x A
    x x x x x x x x x A
    x x x x x x x A - x b
    x x x b x x x x A
     

  In Memory John Paul II by Judi Van Gorder                       
You came to the Church dynamic and strong,
gave hope, fought injustice, with Him belong,
taught us to live well and wept at our wrong,
you listened to our youth, a quest lifelong.
Faithful gather, bells call the throng - for prayer
to heaven where the saints sing your song.
Gwynnvyd gwyr y byd oed vod Agharat
Gwennvuun yn gyfun ae gwiwuawr garyat
Sgannllun am llud hun hoendwc barablad
Gwynlliw eiry difiw difrisc ymdeithyat
Gwen dan eur wiwlenn ledyf edrychyat - gwyl
Yw vannwyl yn y hwyl heul gymheryat.
by Einion 15 century

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites
Sign in to follow this  
Followers 0