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Tinker

Some random thoughts

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3 haiku, kid parole - hummingbird - poet to reader

 

sun drenched days of June

perrenial kid parole

the child in me smiles

 

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small bird sips nectar

floats on invisible wings

nature's hovercraft

 

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tiny bird hovers

on invisible wings

sweet morning glory

 

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words placed on page pass

to the soul through eyes and ears

poet to reader

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Nice Tinker! Clean and profound reflections, enjoyed them all!

 

DC

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The tranquility in these haiku delights, Tinker. When all three are taken together (the way you have shared them here), the result is a macrocosm: the three poems represent lines of a haiku with the last one serving as that "a-ha" moment. icon_smile.gif

 

I like how you adhere to the syllable count. In this case, I think doing so helps reinforce the idea of that "coherent whole" which I mentioned above. Perhaps the thoughts aren't so random?

 

Tony

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words placed on page pass

 

I loved the third poem Tink.

 

I enjoyed all three poems.

 

Thank you.

 

Alek

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