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Devil's Game

 

I nudged

the sleeping cat

who slid

 

from the foot

stool

landing upside

down

 

but righted

herself instantly

 

I'm sorry,

but the devil

made me

do it.

judi Van Gorder

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the ending makes a cat seem the innocent one lol.

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Missed this when you first posted it, Tinker. Very WCW!

 

Tony

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Not sure what this has to do with Tony's World Championship Wrestling, unless it perhaps involves the conscience! I reallllly like this! (Query: do you really need the comma?) Missed it the first time, too, even though badger noted the naughtiness. I'm glad Tony and Victor commented recently, to bring it to the fore. It's a keeper, Tink.

 

- David

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Wrestling, Dave??? Maybe with trying to find better ways to express myself, lol. :rolleyes: I was referring to William Carlos Williams' "Poem":

 

 

As the cat

climbed over

the top of

 

the jamcloset

first the right

forefoot

 

carefully

then the hind

stepped down

 

into the pit of

the empty

flowerpot.

 

 

Tony :smile:

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lol, now I should have known that! But I was stumped, so you got the humor treatment!

Thanks Tony,

- Dave Again

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its ok i thought he was refering to fake wrestling also LOL.... never heard of this person you are referng to tony, but enjoyed the poem with story. hehehe. and where is dear judy aka tinker....

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LOL, The comments are funnier than the poem. Thanks for chiming in Badge, David, Tony, Victor and David.

 

This poem is written patterned after the genius of William Carlos Williams as Tony pointed out. WCW as he is often called is a poet who I didn't like at first and couldn't understand why he was called a great poet. I thought anyone could write that stuff but found it is much harder to write in his style and purpose than it looks. Studying his work I have come to understand and appreciate his efficiency and focus. I am a big WCW fan. If you don't know him, you need to read some of his works especially his most famous the red wheelbarrow and This is just to Say.

 

~~Tink

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judi i love your two short poems after the style of WCW. i will become a fan now of this style. it looks like my poetry will have a new form. thank yo for sharing tinker. funny stuff wrestling with a poem. hah.

 

victor

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