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Work Week #20 Poem a Day

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Work Week

 

Blast in a crowd leaves

destuction meant to last.

City brought to halt

for manhunt without pity

Taut work week ends with one

suspect dead one caught.

Two lives can never

pay back what is due.

Tears of fear end

in grateful cheers.

Why? is the lonely cry.

-------- --Judi Van Gorder

 

Playing with head and tail rhyme.

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Did not even catch the "head and tail". In fact, never even heard of it. Very creative. I think it is emotional because the pace is so fast throughout the poem.

 

But I think I'd a comma. :)

 

suspect dead, one caught.

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