Tinker Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 Moonless Reflection In the black and empty night I walk with my last memory of you, Moonless walk--------- mirrors regret-----Too late to say "thank you"--------- to tell you "I forgive you"--------- to ask your forgiveness--------- to bless your journey--------- to affirm "I love you" Moonless talk--------- mirrors regret.-------I could only utter------------"goodbye". . . .-- -------------- ~~Judi Van Gorder Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonqueen Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 Oh, WOW! I am nuts about this one. I've read it over and over and it nearly makes me cry, each time. I love the way the "Moonless walk", "Moonless talk" and "regret" 'mirror' themselves and each other. Regrets...I imagine we all live with them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 Agree. I like the mirroring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted May 6, 2013 Author Share Posted May 6, 2013 Thanks Tammi, It sometimes makes me want to cry when I read it but I'm a little closer to the subject. Thanks for reading it. Hi Marti, I was playing with words trying to create an almost chant like effect. Thanks for commenting. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonqueen Posted May 7, 2013 Share Posted May 7, 2013 It is much like a 'visual echo', Judi, and I love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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