poetjohncompton Posted February 23, 2016 Share Posted February 23, 2016 on a listless train, rushing through a tunnel the dark abides me with comfort like a swath. that reversed flash warps my eyes into a magic that empties my mind and i visit you in that black moment where you were who you were before. Quote https://www.facebook.com/poetjohncompton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted February 27, 2016 Share Posted February 27, 2016 Good to see you back mp. Imaginative phrasing and word choice that challenges the reader out of their comfort. cheers badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poetjohncompton Posted February 28, 2016 Author Share Posted February 28, 2016 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed and shared your thoughts! I don't know if I'm back but dipping the toe in. I'm on allpoetry.com and I get up to 30 comments a day. Quote https://www.facebook.com/poetjohncompton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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