Tinker Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 a sea mist floats in to mute the colors of spring the roses whisper ************************* dial swings to eighty and road ahead zips behind --- siren sounds Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rhymeguy Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 I love haiku! I just can't write it. Haiku is (are?) like dew drops on roses in the gentle morning sun. These are so lovely, so simple, so elegant. rg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waxwings Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 The second one is right on. I always knew you could. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 a sea mist floats in to mute the colors of spring the roses whisper beautifully delicate, 'whisper' is one of my favourite words badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 Nice Tinker! Loved them both. DC Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 Tinker wrote: a sea mist floats in to mute the colors of spring the roses whisper I hear it ... Tinker wrote: dial swings to eighty and road ahead zips behind --- siren sounds Not exactly the "siren song" I had in mind ... Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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