Lake Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 under the Great BearI see faces in shade smiling and bleeding smiling and bleeding for her children – a mother’s heart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 smiling and bleeding for her children – a mother's heart a mother's heart beats to her child's song goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 a mother's heartbeats to her child's song goldenlangur song screams and crying death Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 songscreams and crying death death - a destination after life goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 death -a destination after life goldenlangur after life what do you want to happen? prepare now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 after life what do you want to happen? prepare now prepare now listen to the birds in spring be in the moment goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 goldenlangur said: Lake said: after life what do you want to happen? prepare now prepare now listen to the birds in spring be in the moment goldenlangur be in the moment a shadow shrinks slowly when watched ~~jvg Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 be in the momenta shadow shrinks slowly when watched ~~tink when watched the sky and the stars become one goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 when watchedthe sky and the stars become one goldenlangur become one in the cold ground - eternal peace Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 become onein the cold ground - eternal peace eternal peace - a sleep without dreams goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 eternal peace - a sleep without dreams goldenlangur without dreams I'm lost between past and future Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 without dreamsI'm lost between past and future Past and future -- known to unknown alone. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 Past and future --known to unknown alone. Quite a complex play here, Tony! alone - I hear your song goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 Quite a complex play here, Tony! alone - I hear your song goldenlangur I agree, Golden! Your song, your lyre, your dance -- my trance. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 Your song,your lyre, your dance -- my trance. my trance lift the veil - another world goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 Your song,your lyre, your dance -- my trance. my trance lift the veil - another world goldenlangur Well done Golden and Tony another world another tones of music all is different Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 Your song,your lyre, your dance -- my trance. my trance lift the veil - another world goldenlangur Well done Golden and Tony another world another tones of music all is different Thank you Alekk! All is different from before -- no more. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 All is differentfrom before -- no more. no more smiles on faces just screams Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 no moresmiles on faces just screams just screams lingering - empty room Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 just screamslingering - empty room Empty room rich man standing - cold tear Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 Empty roomrich man standing - cold tear cold tear a single star on equinox night Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 cold tear a single star on equinox night on equinox night I weave with tears turquoise dream Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 on equinox nightI weave with tears turquoise dream "turquoise dream" is beautiful, Aleksandra! turquoise dream - I sail beyond the sea in a silver boat goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 on equinox nightI weave with tears turquoise dream "turquoise dream" is beautiful, Aleksandra! turquoise dream - I sail beyond the sea in a silver boat goldenlangur Thank you goldenlangur. Your is so inspiring in a silver boat she whitening the linen - for giving ... * ( to the traditional song "Biljana Platno Belese " ) Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 in a silver boatshe whitening the linen - for giving ... * ( to the traditional song "Biljana Platno Belese " ) Thank you Aleksandra for this link. The voices and music are so soulful. What kind of occasion is this sung for? - for giving... each dawn she gathers flowers goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 - for giving...each dawn she gathers flowers goldenlangur flowers - petals open one by one so does your heart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 Hello goldenlangur. This is old traditional song. This song sings a lot of our singers and the origin sings the old singer - now dead Nikola Badev, and I must note that he is from my region - Kavadarci. The song tells how the girl Biljana whitening the linen on fountain of Ohrid lake and at the moment showed up the vintners and she asks from them to be careful of her linen because that linen is for giving to her parents in low for one day when she gonna get marriage. And they are saying to her, if they stepped the linen, they will pay with beautiful wine. But she ask not the wine , but the boy who ride the caravan. So this song is for love, for ones who fall in love, marriage etc. We have tradition to prepare the girls before they get marriage, ok that was more present in the past, now it is changing , but the folklore, the tradition, the songs live forever. Here is the LINKwith the origin voice. Glad you like it golden. flowers in her eyes can't die ever Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 Ok sorry probably me and Lake posted at same time. It is ok go ahead with Lake's poem flowers - petals open one by one so does your heart Sorry Lake it is happening Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 so does your heart can't die ever when spring is here! Using both your excellent last lines, Lake and Aleksandra Thank you Aleksandra for the link - the voice is beautiful. I've downloaded it. goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 I am pleased that you did that goldenlangur Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 so does your heart can't die ever when spring is here! I love your haiku when spring is here! my icebergs do not melt Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 when spring is here! my icebergs do not melt Do not melt like chocolate in my mouth, leftover snow. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 Do not meltlike chocolate in my mouth, leftover snow. leftover snow gives way - new grass Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 leftover snowgives way - new grass new grass bends in spring frost Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 new grassbends in spring frost spring frost bloomed the flowers without beauty. Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 spring frostbloomed the flowers without beauty. without beauty - a glacier lake with tourist boats Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 without beauty -a glacier lake with tourist boats with tourist boats sea lions swim along the moon rises Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 with tourist boatssea lions swim along the moon rises the moon rises I pray in the night my eyes hurts Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 the moon risesI pray in the night my eyes hurts my eyes hurt- the red sun on the robin's breast goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 on the robin's breast lies a youngin ready to take flight Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 on the robin's breastlies a youngin ready to take flight ready to take flight by the light of the new moon - our dreams goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 ready to take flightby the light of the new moon - our dreams goldenlangur our dreams caged in a sin the life is sinful Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 our dreamscaged in a sin the life is sinful Aleksandra the life is sinful without soul - what hope? Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 our dreamscaged in a sin the life is sinful Aleksandra the life is sinful without soul - what hope? what hope? without victims? hurts a lot Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 what hope?without victims? hurts a lot hurts a lot your silence - all these years Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 all these years each dawn's radiance wakes a new hope -----------~~tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 all these yearseach dawn's radience wakes a new hope -----------~~tink wakes a new hope - on the wings of nesting birds spring Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 31, 2009 Author Share Posted May 31, 2009 wakes a new hope -on the wings of nesting birds spring spring, when Karma dreams she smiles Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 spring,when Karma dreams she smiles A lovely thought and image, Aleksandra she smiles - he searches for his mobile in the snow goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summayya Posted May 31, 2009 Share Posted May 31, 2009 in the snow the olive tree -- sun rises. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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