Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Delight in despairstill mesmerized sitting on a shore tears glitter like pearls tears glitter like pearls praying, please put down your bloody gun Glad to meet you, Rony. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 tears glitter like pearlspraying, please put down your bloody gun Glad to meet you, Rony. glad to meet you too.....but i don't know: does haiku speak for modern world or not.....but i like this work. Your bloody gun Roars for the truth Never heard before! Rony in melancholy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Your bloody gunRoars for the truth Never heard before! "Never heard before." Anyone can help? Watch your 5-7-5 step. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Lake is in party mood! Lake wrote: "Never heard before." Anyone can help? Watch your 5-7-5 step. I urge: 5-7-5 step Dancing on the floor Victory we shout, justice we adore! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 5-7-5 stepDancing on the floor Victory we shout, justice we adore! Victory we shout, justice we adore! for us, for you, for me. - death for betrayers. Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Hi Alek! i don't what this haiku becomes, may be it's a revolution call for the socialists and i am getting the old fragrance of my childhood where i would die for the socialist's idealism or Lenin's optimism! Aleksandra wrote: Victory we shout, justice we adore! for us, for you, for me. - death for betrayers. -death for betrayers so march on comrades for a new land to call home RoNy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 Hi Alek! i don't what this haiku becomes, may be it's a revolution call for the socialists and i am getting the old fragrance of my childhood where i would die for the socialist's idealism or Lenin's optimism! Aleksandra wrote: Victory we shout, justice we adore! for us, for you, for me. - death for betrayers. -death for betrayers so march on comrades for a new land to call home RoNy! Hi Rony. May be you are right. When I read it my own haiku, then I felt and said, even to Tony : " hey this is socialistic or communistic " I felt that way, maybe because I grown in socialistic country. So let's go with haiku now For a new land to call home. You stole my motherland. - Don't steal my name! Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Hail Hitlar! let's move to the west to claim our victory Aleksandra wrote: For a new land to call home. You stole my motherland. - Don't steal my name! Don’t steal my name Listen to the thunder rain Blazing sun smiles over black wet land RoNy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Don't steal my nameListen to the thunder rain Blazing sun smiles over black wet land RoNy Blazing sun smiles over black wet land. Apparitions evaporate. Rony, I only have one line, so I cut your last line into two. Hope you don't mind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Apparitions evaporate where the sun does not shine in nightly dreams! where is goldenlangur? anybody heard from him lately. i miss him/her. i don't know if this person is female or male lol. great short poems and haikus everyone. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 Apparitions evaporatewhere the sun does not shine in nightly dreams! where is goldenlangur? anybody heard from him lately. i miss him/her. i don't know if this person is female or male lol. great short poems and haikus everyone. victor No Victor I haven't heard from GL lately. I hope Golden is fine, and will show up soon. I miss him / her too. in nightly dreams! I see all angels - and you above. Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 in nightly dreams!I see all angels - and you above. and you above Milky Way in the middle but me below Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 and you aboveMilky Way in the middle but me below But me below watching you behind the herbs hair propagates reckless! Lake, whatever you do, just do it again, cause your work makes the Haiku train insane Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 But me belowwatching you behind the herbs hair propagates reckless! hair propagates reckless on his chin over the night- unrecognizable. Hope I didn't derail the train. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 But me belowwatching you behind the herbs hair propagates reckless! hair propagates reckless on his chin over the night- unrecognizable. Hope I didn't derail the train. unrecognizable after all this time your voice goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 unrecognizableafter all this time your voice goldenlangur your voice and your face, - icon for me GL how happy I am to see you back in our land WB my friend. Your seat on the train was empty, but it remained reserved Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 unrecognizableafter all this time your voice goldenlangur your voice and your face, - icon for me GL how happy I am to see you back in our land WB my friend. Your seat on the train was empty, but it remained reserved Aleksandra - icon for me, icon for everybody - our golden sun. Welcome back, golden. Thanks for taking the train back on track, I almost derailed it - it was running insane, Rony said. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 - icon for me,icon for everybody - our golden sun. Welcome back, golden. Thanks for taking the train back on track, I almost derailed it - it was running insane, Rony said. Nice to see Langur! Our golden sun Breeze speaks over paddy bed -A Green ocean flows apart Actually Lake injected some revolutionary moode in Haiku whereas our village pictures are not very much aware of it! perhaps, it can be said a fusion, i guess, which is very bright and that's he has the ability to dismantle the environment in limeric moode. And some time diversity is essential to move on! rOnY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 - icon for me,icon for everybody - our golden sun. Welcome back, golden. Thanks for taking the train back on track, I almost derailed it - it was running insane, Rony said. Nice to see Langur! Our golden sun Breeze speaks over paddy bed -A Green ocean flows apart Actually Lake injected some revolutionary moode in Haiku whereas our village pictures are not very much aware of it! perhaps, it can be said a fusion, i guess, which is very bright and that's he has the ability to dismantle the environment in limeric moode. And some time diversity is essential to move on! rOnY Well said Rony! Diversity challenges and pushes our boundaries. And thank you for your warm welcome! Not at all Lake - you posted a haiku which certainly touched a chord. Glad to be back, Aleksandra after my accident. I'll hobble back to normality a green ocean flows apart our worlds in ether we meet Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 a green ocean flows apartour worlds in ether we meet in ether we meet you hobble, I wobble laughing heartily Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 in ether we meetyou hobble, I wobble laughing heartily What a brilliant response, Lake Love the humor laughing heartily we board the haiku train goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 laughing heartilywe board the haiku train goldenlangur the haiku train Darkens the rhythmic sky a cloud shy . rOnY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 the haiku trainDarkens the rhythmic sky a cloud shy . rOnY a cloud shy seeing two lovers under the moonlight Thanks Golden, inspired by your hobbling return. Rony, does this one sound more Haiku? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 a cloud shyseeing two lovers under the moonlight Thanks Golden, inspired by your hobbling return. Rony, does this one sound more Haiku? Lake, as much as i know, i don't know what haiku is! But i think in village lovers do more than sitting beside in moolit night. actually you can say this is pick hour of romance so poem is nothing but imagination translated through words and haiku is something like that but more in the aspect of Village life! so carry on dude! Under the moonlight Skeleton tree resides in nocturnal mind like Scare crow finds a lonely smile RoNy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Under the moonlightSkeleton tree resides in nocturnal mind like Scare crow finds a lonely smile like Scarecrow finds a lonely smile he looks into the mirror a lone reflection Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 like Scarecrow finds a lonely smilehe looks into the mirror a lone reflection a lone reflection covered my face. a blind copy of love. Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 a lone reflectioncovered my face. a blind copy of love. a blind copy of love goes recycled and then reproduced. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 a blind copy of lovegoes recycled and then reproduced. then reproduced. And recycled again. - Circle in order Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 then reproduced.And recycled again. - Circle in order Circle in order ripples from the core - the nebula Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Circle in orderripples from the core - the nebula the nebula fogs my brain a black hole abides Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 the nebulafogs my brain a black hole abides I should have prefaced my response with a nod to your wonderful poem in the forum, Tony So glad you've posted this a great response a black hole abides behind the veil - another universe Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted June 1, 2009 Author Share Posted June 1, 2009 the nebulafogs my brain a black hole abides I should have prefaced my response with a nod to your wonderful poem in the forum, Tony So glad you've posted this a great response a black hole abides behind the veil - another universe Very well my friends . I love how the work goes here. another universe another life. Show me the Milky Way. Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Very well my friends . I love how the work goes here. another universe another life. Show me the Milky Way. show me the Milky Way not just its astral presence but where does it lead? goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 show me the Milky Waynot just its astral presence but where does it lead? “But where does it lead?” asked the deaf to the blind. This is awful. I'll try again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 "But where does it lead?"asked the deaf to the blind. This is awful. I'll try again. Not at all, Lake to the blind the world opens at their fingertips Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 fingertips do my walking i dance on keyboard Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 fingertipsdo my walking i dance on keyboard I dance on keyboard, black and white my favorite, just like yin and yang. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 I dance on keyboard,black and white my favorite, just like yin and yang. just like yin and yang the cat and the dog doze - late autumn noon goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 just like yin and yangthe cat and the dog doze - late autumn noon goldenlangur late autumn noon in the swirl of falling leaves bleak as winter moon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 late autumn noonin the swirl of falling leaves bleak as winter moon bleak as winter moon this waiting for your call goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 bleak as winter moonthis waiting for your call call for help fades away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 fades away dreams so sour my worst nightmare! Haiku train is in full pace, DUDE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 fades awaydreams so sour my worst nightmare! Haiku train is in full pace, DUDE We do seem to be chugging away happily my worst nightmare not remembering your face goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 my worst nightmarenot remembering your face your face glitters - fireflies at night Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 your face glitters - fireflies at night Fabulous image, Lake fireflies at night trace your footsteps - in dreams goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 fireflies at nighttrace your footsteps - in dreams Thanks Golden. After you. in dreams my tears wet the pillowcase Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 in dreamsmy tears wet the pillowcase Your responses are always brilliant, Lake A pleasure to follow you wet the pillowcase each waxing moon in silence goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lake Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 wet the pillowcaseeach waxing moon in silence in silence sound of heart beat louder than drum beats Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 Lake said: goldenlangur said: wet the pillowcase each waxing moon in silence in silence sound of heart beat louder than drum beats louder than drum beats your harsh words repeat in my head leaving me hollow Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 1, 2009 Share Posted June 1, 2009 louder than drum beatsyour harsh words repeat in my head leaving me hollow leaving me hollow like a drum your good-bye poem Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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