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Aleksandra

Haiku Train - catch it - free tickets

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I dread

the upcoming snow storm

Pain in the back

 

 

Pain in the back -

honking in the petrol queue

silver-haired lady

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I dread

the upcoming snow storm

Pain in the back

 

 

Pain in the back -

honking in the petrol queue

silver-haired lady

 

silver-haired lady

mourns for her black-haired son

Haiti earthquake

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Lake said:
goldenlangur said:
Gatekeeper said:
I dread
the upcoming snow storm
Pain in the back
           Keeper

Pain in the back -
honking in the petrol queue
silver-haired lady
              GoldenLangur

silver-haired lady
mourns for her black-haired son
Haiti earthquake
                   Lake

I am loving the activity here. Sorry I had to make slight edits to the line for my words to work....

Haiti's earth quakes
and its palace crumbles
thirsty lost child
                         ~~jvg

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I am loving the activity here. Sorry I had to make slight edits to the line for my words to work....

 

Haiti's earth quakes

and its palace crumbles

thirsty lost child

~~Tink

 

 

No need for apologies really, Tink. Good to see this train chugging along. :D

 

thirsty lost child

eyes the ice cream stall -

spring holiday

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goldenlangur said:
Tinker said:
I am loving the activity here. Sorry I had to make slight edits to the line for my words to work....
Haiti's earth quakes
and its palace crumbles
thirsty lost child

~~Tink

No need for apologies really, Tink. Good to see this train chugging along. :D

thirsty lost child
eyes the ice cream stall -
spring holiday
            GoldenLangur

spring holiday
creek water flooded pasture
stranded baby goat
--------- ~~~jvg

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spring holiday

creek water flooded pasture

stranded baby goat

--------- ~~~Tink

 

Stranded baby goat

bleats loudly for assistance

Coyote listening

Edited by Gatekeeper

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Stranded baby goat

bleats loudly for assistance

Coyote listening

 

 

Coyote listening

to a storm's wind through the trees

The howling

 

 

~by the Gate~

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Coyote listening

to a storm's wind through the trees

The howling

 

The howling

of stray dogs

earthquake night

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goldenlangur said:
Gatekeeper said:
Coyote listening
to a storm's wind through the trees
The howling

The howling
of stray dogs
earthquake night
            ~~goldenlangur

earthquake night
pond frogs go silent
in the still air
                ~~jvg

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earthquake night

pond frogs go silent

in the still air

 

 

in the still air

cold settles between the bones

stars remain silent

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Gatekeeper said:
Tinker said:
earthquake night
pond frogs go silent
in the still air
            ~~jvg

in the still air
cold settles between the bones
stars remain silent
                       keeper

stars remain silent
while the moon smiles upon
lovers' rendezvous
                    ~~jvg

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stars remain silent

while the moon smiles upon

lovers' rendevous

 

 

Lovers' rendevous

witnessed in the rose garden

Lovely scent with thorns

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Gatekeeper said:
Tinker said:
stars remain silent
while the moon smiles upon
lovers' rendezvous
                     ~~jvg

Lovers' rendezvous
witnessed in the rose garden
Lovely scent with thorns
                   Keeper

Lovely scent with thorns
hidden beneath lush green leaves.
a cricket sings
                     ~~jvg

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Lovely scent with thorns

hidden beneath lush green leaves.

a cricket sings

 

 

A cricket sings

but stridulation wasted

A pet in a cage

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a cricket sings
but stridulation wasted
A pet in a cage
                   Keeper

a pet in a cage
on the bedroom windowsill
rabbits play outside
                ~~jvg

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a pet in a cage

on the bedroom windowsill

rabbits play outside

 

rabbits play outside --

dashes of white

in the last light

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goldenlangur said:

rabbits play outside --
dashes of white
in the last light
               ~goldenlangur

GL, How nice to see you here...

in the last light
amongst the dimming shadows
a field mouse skitters
                  ~~jvg

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rabbits play outside --

dashes of white

in the last light

 

 

GL, How nice to see you here...

 

in the last light

amongst the dimming shadows

a field mouse skitters

 

 

A field mouse skitters

leaving a rustle of leaves

Screech owl turns her head

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A field mouse skitters

leaving a rustle of leaves

Screech owl turns her head

 

Screech owl turns her head

and bang, bang...

the child is dead.

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Aleksandra said:
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A field mouse skitters
leaving a rustle of leaves
Screech owl turns her head
                            Keeper

Screech owl turns her head
and bang, bang...
the child is dead.
                     Aleks

Oooooh Aleks, nice to see you writing but this one is challenge...

the child is dead
lying on a park bench
sobs tear at my heart
                       ~~jvg

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A field mouse skitters

leaving a rustle of leaves

Screech owl turns her head

 

Screech owl turns her head

and bang, bang...

the child is dead.

 

Oooooh Aleks, nice to see you writing but this one is challenge...

 

the child is dead

lying on a park bench

sobs tear at my heart

 

sobs tear at my heart

the end of my lover

a new outlook for me

 

couldnt resist great ones tink and aleks

 

 

victor

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a new outlook for me
drop of water, grain of sand
I am
                         ~~jvg

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I am

a crust of frost

in the last light

 

in the last light

Dragon King rises

from Himalaya

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I am

a crust of frost

in the last light

 

in the last light

Dragon King rises

from Himalaya

 

*********************************************

 

From Himalaya

the stream of water flows slow

into a small pond

 

***************************************************

 

another haiku

 

From the very high peak

the stream of water flows slow

into a small pond

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