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Tinker

3 haiku, kid parole - hummingbird - poet to reader

sun drenched days of June
perennial kid parole
the child in me smiles
***
small bird sips nectar
floats on invisible wings
nature's hovercraft
***
tiny bird hovers
on invisible wings
sweet morning glory

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words placed on page pass
to the soul through eyes and ears
poet to reader


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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dr_con

Nice Tinker! Clean and profound reflections, enjoyed them all!

 

DC


"Everything is trying to Prove the Perfection of its own Perception" Dr. Concrescence's The Law of EPPP

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tonyv

The tranquility in these haiku delights, Tinker. When all three are taken together (the way you have shared them here), the result is a macrocosm: the three poems represent lines of a haiku with the last one serving as that "a-ha" moment. icon_smile.gif

 

I like how you adhere to the syllable count. In this case, I think doing so helps reinforce the idea of that "coherent whole" which I mentioned above. Perhaps the thoughts aren't so random?

 

Tony


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Aleksandra

words placed on page pass

 

I loved the third poem Tink.

 

I enjoyed all three poems.

 

Thank you.

 

Alek


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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