tonyv Posted September 28, 2009 Light spreads darkly downwards from the high Clusters of lights over empty chairs That face each other, coloured differently. Through open doors, the dining-room declares A larger loneliness of knives and glass And silence laid like carpet. A porter reads An unsold evening paper. Hours pass, And all the salesmen have gone back to Leeds, Leaving full ashtrays in the Conference Room. In shoeless corridors, the lights burn. How Isolated, like a fort, it is -- The headed paper, made for writing home (If home existed) letters of exile: NowNight comes on. Waves fold behind villages. Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aleksandra Posted October 23, 2009 Tony, I like how you are getting someones mood, in the case Larkin's mood :). I really love your reading taste. Thanks for sharing this poem. Aleksandra The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A. Baez Posted November 28 Thank you for pointing me to this. It's always inspiring to see a traditional form handled competently by a contemporary. Interesting, the unrhymed third line (meant to half-rhyme with "reads" and "Leeds"?). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites