Rea Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Write me a love song… Write me a love song straight from your heart Dress it with bluebells and dainty love starts Terms of endearment Darling it's you Honey, I love you Keep writing… I do….. Script with a passion love and desire Words laced with memories, and blazing red fires Primroses daisies, cowslips, adore Lovingly picking, aroma's encore Terms of endearment Darling it's you Honey, I love you Keep writing… I do…. Silver springs gushing, clear aqua blue Quenching thirst moments, drenching with dew Love from my heart, falling for you Melting mad moments, grey skies are blue Terms of endearment Darling, It's you Honey, I love you Keep writing… I do…. It's true…. To you.... © Rea 20th March 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonqueen Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 (edited) Rea, so good to see you, here! I love this piece. The style is so obviously yours. I know you write a lot of pieces with relevance in today's world, but I most especially love your romantic works. Even in this mess, love lives on. I enjoyed the repetitions, almost as reinforcers of the proclamations. Great work on this one. Tammi Edited March 25, 2011 by moonqueen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PDgb Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Hey look I know this person. Hope you are enjoying this new forum. I know I am. I liked this poem a lot. Not as concrete as I'm used to enjoying but your flow and rhythm were so perfect it didn't matter. I especially liked the "I dos" scattered throughout. Very powerful indeed. Quote GBrenton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Welcome, Rea. I enjoyed this romantic poem, especially the refrain and how you tied it in to the last lines. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted March 25, 2011 Share Posted March 25, 2011 Hi Rea, Nice to meet you. :D I think this is a timely poem for spring with its allusions of new beginning. Your lovely images of flowers of the season works well with the romantic theme of the poem. Thank you. Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rea Posted March 25, 2011 Author Share Posted March 25, 2011 Hi Rea, Nice to meet you. :D I think this is a timely poem for spring with its allusions of new beginning. Your lovely images of flowers of the season works well with the romantic theme of the poem. Thank you. Hello Tammi, Pd, Tony, and Golden Thank you for the warm welcome, and the comments. I look forward to reading your work. Best wishes Rea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 Hello Rea and welcome to the forum. Your poem adds another dimension to the variety of work on view here. I hope you enjoy the time you spend here and find it a fruitful experience. Regards Benjamin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 (edited) wow, ok i didnt realise what i had written lol. i meant to say you must think of someone as your prince in shining armour lol. victor michael. ps. i am embaqrassed over that comment. i live in a nursing home and was sent out to a state hospital in louville kentucky. i believe in past lives. i will not insinuate but i might of been one of the apostles or that is how my life seems to be dictating. i belive a person hould move forward and re3ally not dwelling on the past meanning you shouldn't judge have acceptence and move forwaed. i had such hard road to this point in my life. i know there will be a acension and i will go up in it. the world needs my intellect lol. i will be a surgeon more then likely. i scored number one in medical school. i learned everything properly only to find out i was not wanted by a certain ethinicity race. i am german duesth amish portuguse and scandinavain and people think i am jewish i don't get it. my parents think they are jewish. i tell them they are hebrew descendants not jewish. i don't know if that will even matter in the future. no need for comment. whether i am deceived by spirits in spirit realm or making it all up who cares. blessed be rea. Edited July 20, 2011 by Larsen M. Callirhoe Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rosschandler Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 i liked the rhythmic portions of this poem. the use of blue twice in the last stanza weakens the work somewhat. but i am not here to correct you but just admire the art involved in your expression. it is very much a song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rea Posted April 1, 2011 Author Share Posted April 1, 2011 wow, prince michael catholic saint Hello Larsen I'm unsure what the comment mean? Rea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted April 2, 2011 Share Posted April 2, 2011 Write me a love song…Write me a love song straight from your heart Dress it with bluebells and dainty love starts Terms of endearment Darling it's you Honey, I love you Keep writing… I do….. Script with a passion love and desire Words laced with memories, and blazing red fires Primroses daisies, cowslips, adore Lovingly picking, aroma's encore Terms of endearment Darling it's you Honey, I love you Keep writing… I do…. Silver springs gushing, clear aqua blue Quenching thirst moments, drenching with dew Love from my heart, falling for you Melting mad moments, grey skies are blue Terms of endearment Darling, It's you Honey, I love you Keep writing… I do…. It's true…. To you.... © Rea 20th March 2010 Hi Rea. A prolific writer covering us with emotions. I took in the poem whole and just let it dissolve with pleasure throughout. Strange, there is a Rea at every poetry site I visit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rea Posted May 3, 2011 Author Share Posted May 3, 2011 Hello Rea and welcome to the forum. Your poem adds another dimension to the variety of work on view here. I hope you enjoy the time you spend here and find it a fruitful experience. Regards Benjamin. Hello Benjamin Thank you for the kind welcome, but where is everyone, today, yesterday, now, and here? Best wishes Rea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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