summayya Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 ----------Love Poem ---------------My heart flies -------on light winds towards you. --Over me, the ever-alive forest ----------sways its branches -----------------in e c s t a s y. I have been in a real bad writer's block so excuse the rustiness. I would like to thank tony for the help. A Big thank you Tony! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pawn shop Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Gothic.......sounds more like a love spell has been cast and is seeking out it's victim Tony gets all the credit around here....what dah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 ----------Love Poem ---------------My heart flies -------on light winds towards you. --Over me, the ever-alive forest ----------sways its branches -----------------in e c s t a s y. Hey Summ, it's nice to see you getting your muse back. This is a lovely poem, but unfortunately I can't take any of the credit; the words are all yours. I do think it's a great title, though. Hmmm ... I wonder why??? Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Tony gets all the credit around here....what dah Hey Jonathan ... you only get what you give! Lend a hand, and people will thank you all day long! Okay, as those Bartles & James guys used to say in that wine cooler commercial: Thank you for your support! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Summayya this poem sounds wonderful. Especially I loved how this one starts summayya wrote: ----------Love Poem ---------------My heart flies -------on light winds towards you. And then the describing with natural symbols, what is wonderful choice for this poem. I am glad that Tony helped you with your writer's block. He knows how to do that a lot. I am happy that we share Tony here and his knowledges. And don't be jealous Jonathan this is just poetry Summ I loved this poem and this one have the best title. Thank you for sharing. I wait for more. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Hi summayya, Lovely, delicate imageries mark your return to writing! How wonderful! goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted May 13, 2009 Share Posted May 13, 2009 Sort of segways down the page to ocupy more space and fill out the imagery Summayya. Effective, girl. Frank Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summayya Posted May 13, 2009 Author Share Posted May 13, 2009 Thanks for the feedback everyone! It is much appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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