Things he said

[douglas]

He said that the eyes I drew

Were expressive

- I liked that

 

He said that the way my hair hung

Across my forehead reminded him

Of Rupert Everett

- I liked that too

 

He said that he was glad that

I’d phoned him

- I also liked that

 

But what I like

And what I really desire

Are not necessarily the same things

[poetjohncompton]

This is sad. I really enjoyed it.

I liked the talk pattern of it!

[Tinker]

Hi Douglas, Like MP, I thought the frame or manner in which you present each thought is very effective. There is a pleasing rhythm that concludes in an unfulfilled tone. Poignant.

 

~~Tink

[Frank E Gibbard]

great lay-out pattern there Douglas and evokes your youness sweetly. Frank

[bob]

This poem reflects mixed emotions. The mind is a complex, vital part of human anatomy. It is capable of interpreting different messages at the same time. The five sensory organs may well be sending complimentary thoughts, but the mind is independantly capable of desiring something totally different to appease it.

TRUE LOVE is capable of channeling all senses jointly. YarnSpinner