Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted December 17, 2015 Share Posted December 17, 2015 The Monster In The Closet Why is it everytime i go to bed the red man with a harry face hovers over my bed when i go to sleep in the dark leaving my closet to the roaches his minions. As soon as i pray his name and turn the lights on his vioice speaks to me and if i ignore him he flickers the light and it goes out. Then there is screaming in my ears. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bob Posted December 17, 2015 Share Posted December 17, 2015 WOW! if I had these nightmares I would seek help to find out WHY!!! Wishing you more pleasant dreams. YarnSpinner As a writer...only a suggestion... since you do not punctuate your sentences, would the statements flowmore easily to be read? I submit a possible suggestion. Why is it everytime i go to bed the red man with a harry face leaves my closet to his roaches and minions and in the dark he hovers over my bed when i go to sleep As soon as i pray his name and turn the lights on his vioice speaks to me if i ignore him he flickers the light it goes out, then there is screaming in my ears Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted December 18, 2015 Share Posted December 18, 2015 Hi Victor, Quite frightening, I hope this is a fictional piece. Sweet dreams, ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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