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12 minutes ago, badger11 said:

Thanks for the interaction Tony. Highlighted the dangers/potentials of verbs/prepositions.

Sometimes the process reinforces the validity of those original choices.




Thank you. "Be" in L6 isn't an especially strong verb, but it is significant to the poem and the message, and I'm thinking another verb in L4 might just overpower it. I'm still keeping my mind open to the options.

With appreciation,


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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