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I dreamt of being a she wolf 

sleeping with one eye open
in a forest-in the distance i
could see my human self in 
a watchtower carved out of
my frozen tears.Laid in hospital
attached to a drip cancer undresses
feminist consciousness the moon 
howls and the sun hollas as I catheterize
it to fill me with fire. The only thing now
scene from the watchtower is a forest of
burning trees.  

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Tinker

Hi Barry,  This is quite moving, I had no problem embracing this piece.  The images clear,  "watchtower carved out of my frozen tears"  WOW!

~~Tink
 


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tonyv

Enticing ... until the part about the human self sets in. Good work, Barry.

Tony


Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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