Tinker Posted July 23, 2019 Share Posted July 23, 2019 Sitting Under My Flowering Pear The gilded banter quickens with each gust of wind. Speaking all at the same time, the chatter of restless leaves rises and falls riding the wings of the zephyr while scents of sage, apple, and honeysuckle hitch on board. The glitter of the golden sun peeks through the lacy canopy to eavesdrop. ~~ Judi Van Gorder Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted July 23, 2019 Share Posted July 23, 2019 Imagery, alliteration, personification. Like the old commercial said, "Good stuff, Maynard!" 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted July 28, 2019 Share Posted July 28, 2019 I love the sensuality, in particular the scents that amalgamate into a single expression of the terrior at the moment of composition. A pleasurable read -- there is a fineness to this poem (title included). Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 29, 2019 Author Share Posted July 29, 2019 Thanks Marti, Sometimes a poem speaks to you and you have to write it down. I'm glad you liked it Tony, I have been loving the balmy mornings that allow me to sit under the tree and just listen to my garden, a great way to start the day. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted August 19, 2019 Share Posted August 19, 2019 Tink, this is one of your most sensuous works. Vivid imagery, a fine tactile sense of the balm. Nice! - David Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted August 19, 2019 Share Posted August 19, 2019 a sensual feast Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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