tonyv Posted December 15, 2019 Share Posted December 15, 2019 The Coast, Part III: Sunday Afternoon ... This is the rhythm of the night, and round and round we go, no reason to repent ... "Yea bruh, she know just how to climb dat pole!" "And for a C-note she gon ride ma pole!" "Not every ho you human traffic, bruh!" ... This is the rhythm, the rhythm of the night ... Her bright eyes light this diamond mine; she moves, exquisitely, first up, around, then down. _____________________________________Corona "The Rhythm of the Night" Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted December 15, 2019 Share Posted December 15, 2019 Now this one is really good. Love the rhythm, love the refrain, it also has some humor. I like this the best of the 3. Someone once said, if she ends up on a pole, you've failed as a parent. Actually, pole dancing is a very acrobatic, difficult exercise and has become a popular work out medium. But this poem doesn't pretend to be anything other than what it is. I like it. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 15, 2019 Author Share Posted December 15, 2019 10 hours ago, Tinker said: Now this one is really good. Love the rhythm, love the refrain, it also has some humor. I like this the best of the 3. Someone once said, if she ends up on a pole, you've failed as a parent. Actually, pole dancing is a very acrobatic, difficult exercise and has become a popular work out medium. But this poem doesn't pretend to be anything other than what it is. I like it. ~~Judi Thank you, Judi. I'm glad you like it. I figured it would serve to wind down the weekend. As always, looking forward to the next one. Tony 😀 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted December 17, 2019 Author Share Posted December 17, 2019 "I'm serious as cancer when I say rhythm is a dancer" classic 90's eurodance Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 11, 2023 Author Share Posted June 11, 2023 JOHN AND THE VOLTA "PARALIZED" 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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