tonyv Posted April 5, 2020 Share Posted April 5, 2020 Salem #tonyv from 4/3-4/5 2020 All the rabble had its eyes on me when all I did was smoke a cigarette in Salem, Massachusetts. At her hanging, in the public square, I had a buzz; 'twas from the rum. She was a daffodil last night. I loved that hussy all night long. __________________Salem Witch Trials 2 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 5, 2020 Share Posted April 5, 2020 I love poems that step back into history. You are a master of meter... A ruby I would think. ~~Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 5, 2020 Share Posted April 5, 2020 Oh yes oh yes... a scene so clear & vivid. Another marvelous gem! J 1 Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 5, 2020 Author Share Posted April 5, 2020 Thank you both. I know these poems I'm posting as part of this poem/day thing are bit half-assed, but that's all I can manage at this rate. Gonna try to keep up. Tony 😃 1 Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 9, 2020 Share Posted April 9, 2020 Tony, The daily thing pushes you and the poems I write are sometimes just getting something on the page. But there is value in each piece, maybe the seeds of a poem that will take more time to be polished and/or expanded or one to just be abandoned. In sales for me the rule of thumb is 3 nos to 1 yes. So far you have produced only yeses. But it is a good discipline. I'd be proud to say I wrote any one of your offerings. I wouldn't consider this one half assed at all. It's really good. ~~Judi 1 Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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