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Write a haiku to go with this picture....

 

Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

------------------------------------------------ flying fox launches
------------------------------------------------ snow bound prey hopelessly flees
------------------------------------------------ mouse morsel


~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~

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Aleksandra

Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

The life race

makes streaks in the snow

cleared by the time...


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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tonyv

Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

------------------------------------------------ an ominous shadow

------------------------------------------------ fire rains down from the sky

------------------------------------------------ run for your life


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goldenlangur

Great to see this idea and thread here too icon_biggrin.png

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur

Tinker wrote:Write a haiku to go with this picture....

 

Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

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------------------------------------------------

------------------------------------------------

 

 

though I'm not Tom

I'd still like to play

with you, Jerry!


goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Aleksandra
Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

------------------------------------------------ an ominous shadow

------------------------------------------------ fire rains down from the sky

------------------------------------------------ run for your life

 

Ahhh Tony wonderful expression " fire rains down from the sky "

 

I loved it...

 

Alek


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Aleksandra
Tinker wrote:Write a haiku to go with this picture....

 

Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

------------------------------------------------

------------------------------------------------

------------------------------------------------

 

 

though I'm not Tom

I'd still like to play

with you, Jerry!

 

Goldenlangur, icon_biggrin.png very nice. So interesting. lol.gif Jerry is so cute in the cartoons, but like this ... icon_silent.pngaffraid.gif

 

Well done

 

Aleksandra


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

History of Macedonia

 

 

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Write a haiku to go with this picture....

 

Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

------------------------------------------------ flying fox launches

------------------------------------------------ snow bound prey hopelessly flees

------------------------------------------------ mouse morsel

 

 

 

 

Hi Tink,

 

Lost my last post - hope this comes through - all the different posts on this thread seem to link seamlessly - perhaps its just me being technically inept icon_redface.gif Anyway here it goes:

 

 

Your response describes the pic very clearly icon_smile.gif The lack of cover in the snow is brought out well.

 

 

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Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

The life race

makes streaks in the snow

cleared by the time...

 

 

Hi Aleksandra,

 

 

"life" making "streaks in the snow" is a good slant to the challenge in your response!

 

 

goldenlangur


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Fox20Mouse.jpg

 

------------------------------------------------ an ominous shadow

------------------------------------------------ fire rains down from the sky

------------------------------------------------ run for your life

 

Hi Tony,

 

 

I like how you bring out the threat of the fox : "ominous shadow". And the advice in the last line, conveys that sense of the helplessness of the mouse.

 

 

goldenlangur


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Aleksandra

Come on lets move a little here icon_biggrin.png. Tink come on pick up someone to go ahead icon_biggrin.png.

 

Aleksandra


The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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Tinker

Oh my, I forgot all about this. Ok, I am going to pick Tony this time. I loved his "fire rained down from the sky"

 

~~Tink

 

Ok Tony, post a picture and we will get another round going.


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goldenlangur

Congratulations Tony icon_biggrin.png A worthy winner! icon_cool.gif

 

 

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Aleksandra

Yea congrats Tony :D

I agree with GL - " a worthy winner " icon_biggrin.png

 

Aleks


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Thanks, all, for the congrats! icon_biggrin.png Okay, here's the pic ...

 

Picture049.jpg

 

--------------------------------------------------Moon and stars delight.

--------------------------------------------------Nightbirds and moths are in flight --

--------------------------------------------------Arabian nights.

 

 

 

(All right, so it's banal and it rhymes icon_lol.gif , but I'm not going to win this twice! icon_cool.gif )


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Aleksandra

Picture049.jpg

Dance with the moon,

in the dark sky

Twinkling stars


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goldenlangur

Picture049.jpg

 

 

 

 

can the crescent compete

with spotlights over

this dream landscape?

 

 

goldenlangur icon_wink.gif


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Wistful Poet

Mouse has gone for a stroll

Fox is craving a snack

Run Mouse run!


"If you are faced with a dissappointment or a bad situation ask, will it matter in 10 years?

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Aleksandra

Ok let's move on here too icon_smile.gif

 

Me like a girl ( Tony, don't complain, please icon_smile.gif ) will post a photo and let's write some haiga about this, for me, wonderful photo

 

The20Wind-vi.jpg

 

Haiga Anyone?

 

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goldenlangur

The20Wind-vi.jpg

 

 

with clouds behind us

my children and I face

the sun

 

(goldenlangur)

 

 

Good to see this thread given a new lease on life, Aleksandra!


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Aleksandra

That was my intention goldenlangur. I enjoy when I am bringing back the old " forgotten " nice things, back. I did once with one of poetry manifestation in my city, what it was so hard to do it, but I made it. So I love to bring some more attention here again, because this thread is nice and fun to work on.

 

Thank you for participation my friend. Your poem is wonderful, and it explains exactly what the photo shows.

 

Very powerful expressed.

 

Aleksandra


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The20Wind-vi.jpg

Man abides.

Wind, prairie, and sky --

God provides.

 

 

PS -- "Man" = mankind, Alek icon_wink.gif :))


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