Frank E Gibbard Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 A mountain winks in situ And tips its snowy top hat In a curtained proscenium Bowing after a great show Flanked by a tree bouquet Beckoning as in invitation To celebrate divine nature A panorama mute and still Fanfares loud bright colour Burning their retinal print On my mind’s gallery wall In my private art collection Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted July 17, 2009 Share Posted July 17, 2009 Frank this is a good poem. It is picturesque and very poetical. I wished you share the picture what inspired this poem. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 I like what this makes me see, Frank. It's evokes the same sense of wonder one gets when looking at a postcard that depicts such an image. The ending is inspired: Burning their retinal printOn my mind’s gallery wall In my private art collection ... and it makes me want to procure more works for own "private art collection." Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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