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Insignificant Dreamers

 

 

Under the Bodhi

a stray and I shelter

eye one another

his, flies- infested

mine, stung without sleep -

insignificant dreamers.

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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Man and man's best friend, each alone in the world, and each with noticeable signs of their plight, recognizable to each other, connect for a moment under this BODHI TREE. The irony is, that if these two are insignificant, then what is sigificant?

 

Tony

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You have the most unique talent for capturing the moment. The reader can easily invision the entire scene so perfectly.

In L4 I would say "fly" instead of "flies" but that is just if I nit pick.

 

Thank you for sharing this moment.

 

rg

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This is amazing piece of poetry goldenlangur. I love this subject spoked by you. You have always a way of expressing.

 

This poem captured me, and you know how much I love these poems of yours connected with the tradicion and life. The moment expressed in your poem, like a germ stare at me as nirvana, but it got interupted by the " flies " / but still the dreamers are insignificant . Gl very debatable theme. You drew a perfect image GL.

 

I love this piece of treasure.

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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I agree with all the previous comments. A stunning scene and since I have been reading the Lotus Sutra- The Bodhi tree and its world weary dreamers become even more illuminated;-)

 

Well, well done!

 

DC

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